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the train i missed
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I saw his eyelids as he pulled them down over his eyes in thought
and I saw the stars that danced before him in his rapt darkness.
and I noticed that they resembled my stars too accurately to be overlooked.
so I told him:
“I’ve seen those stars, I am where you are.”
but his reply was muffled by a dozen passerby.
I saw his fingerprints on the walls and the floor
and I noticed that they resembled my own too accurately to be ignored.
so I asked him:
“what colour is the light that you see?”
and it turns out his violet was my violet as well.
so I asked him:
“which train are you waiting for?”
but he hadn’t the time to reply.
he’d run out of time.
and although he was only a fragment of mine
I’ve hope he will return
appear in another body
or on another train
or on my other life-line.
and I saw the stars that danced before him in his rapt darkness.
and I noticed that they resembled my stars too accurately to be overlooked.
so I told him:
“I’ve seen those stars, I am where you are.”
but his reply was muffled by a dozen passerby.
I saw his fingerprints on the walls and the floor
and I noticed that they resembled my own too accurately to be ignored.
so I asked him:
“what colour is the light that you see?”
and it turns out his violet was my violet as well.
so I asked him:
“which train are you waiting for?”
but he hadn’t the time to reply.
he’d run out of time.
and although he was only a fragment of mine
I’ve hope he will return
appear in another body
or on another train
or on my other life-line.
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"I died for beauty, but was scarce
Adjusted in the tomb,
When one who died for truth was lain
In an adjoining room.
He questioned softly why I failed?
"For beauty", I replied.
"And I for truth - the two are one;
"We brethren are", he said.
And so, as kinsmen met a night,
We talked between the rooms,
Until the moss had reached our lips,
And covered up our names."
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Adjusted in the tomb,
When one who died for truth was lain
In an adjoining room.
He questioned softly why I failed?
"For beauty", I replied.
"And I for truth - the two are one;
"We brethren are", he said.
And so, as kinsmen met a night,
We talked between the rooms,
Until the moss had reached our lips,
And covered up our names."
E