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he came
and taught
and told us to be good.
some said he was the son of god.
we killed him
how rude.
he fell to hell and ploughed the lost souls
and forgave us and
set us free.
then said goodbye and rose to the sky
leaving us quite alone
with our guns and frowns
and sins.
he waits
in heaven
till hell is full again.
Jesus is just god’s maid.
and well
its been 2005 years.
he’s a bit of a slacker.
I wouldnt hire him
for my spring cleaning.
and taught
and told us to be good.
some said he was the son of god.
we killed him
how rude.
he fell to hell and ploughed the lost souls
and forgave us and
set us free.
then said goodbye and rose to the sky
leaving us quite alone
with our guns and frowns
and sins.
he waits
in heaven
till hell is full again.
Jesus is just god’s maid.
and well
its been 2005 years.
he’s a bit of a slacker.
I wouldnt hire him
for my spring cleaning.
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the whole thing is a little too stop and go, too stuttery for me. but i quite enjoyed the "we killed him how rude." bit. entertaining. id write you some constructive criticism but that never works out for me, so i say fuck it and to each their own.