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Who’s to say this beeping isn’t a spell in our ears?
Who is to say that this barely audible thunder outside isn’t really the sound of the beating of the hooves of the dead horses?

We assume they are gone, but they are not.

It’s the buzz of electricity that stifles the warnings of the ghosts.
They cry out through the paved cities, in between the metal-clad floodgates of skyscrapers and window washers,
but our cars run over their sound-waves in a hurry to catch tomorrow before it’s today.

             (chances are we won’t even learn each other’s names)
We are all blindfolded in this panic-room of an office-building elevator
But somehow we know the lights aren’t working either.
And somehow we know we are underground -
Safe in our grave.

And I am glad we are afraid.
Who’s to say we deserve to get out of here alive anyway?
©2006-2009 ~HectateNemesis
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:iconblind-zero:
That was truly an amazing read. I Really enjoyed it.
:iconhectatenemesis:
thank you so much

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lex
:iconobscuritee:
I felt it conveyed a philosophical meaning as well, One that I am fond of. The deprivation of real authentic existence is so apparrent and we are all to blind to see it. can we not understand that this proceedure we use to get through life is the method which destroys it? That is what I interpreted based on my own speculations of your poem... but nonetheless well expressed it was a good poem

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Remember me as Chaos
:iconlovingthedark:
Awesome, as usual.

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Reality is what you make of it.
:iconsoggypizza:
i like this one. a lot

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"Yesterday I saw you kissing tiny flowers
But all that lives is born to die
And so I say to you that nothing really matters
And all you do is stand and cry"
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Check this out: ~MusicIsOurReligion ~ColourCult
:iconedgarguest:
so I've actually started reading your stuff. Being more conscious of what I'm actually reading, and its pretty involving. good imagery. I can always understand what your writing about without totally understanding it ye know? What I mean is the conveyance of the particular mood or state of mind of the unfortunate fuck who is in these situations or what have you. Its like being in a surreal dream, where its not totally a nightmare but everything is just off a degree or two. anyhow, mood, emotion, i can feel it my stomach, straight to the core. I still wonder who they all are however, or rather who they are to you.
:iconhectatenemesis:
involving? how do you mean?
im far from an expert and im sure most of the shit that comes out of my fingers is poorly worded and intangible, but thank you for recognizing that i do try to express a feeling as well as a message.
they are just people and places i meet in passing. i really have no right to expose them in the light i do.
feeling with your stomach is so much better than

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lex

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